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BW2/3 Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Jay and Judy were four feet apart when she fell down on her injured arm. She got her injury in the evening when she was practicing martial arts.

Jay's room was small, clutter and smell.

A cab driver with a friendly face drove Jay to the hotel.

When Judy gave Jay a note " I love you", Jay was very excited. He thought that Judy was teasing at him. His heart was fluttering. In the meantime, he was afraid that his girlfriend found out, who worked right next to him in the same offiice. He did not want his emotion to betray him so he tried to be calm. He saw Judy in the canteen but his girlfriend was here. He was waiting for a chance to talk to her. On the second day, Judy did not appear in the canteen. He was thinking that she probably changed her mind. Until the fourth day, she showed up in the canteen.

Jay wanted her young body for a long time. She was smart as well as attarctive.

The car broke down twice from Point A to Point B. The first time was forty miles away from point A.

What evil had taken them as they attacked our hotel with no reason.

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