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When the pill stuck in Jay's mouth, he felt it melting and bitter taste. It dissolved quickly when he drank some water.
The mountain that I climbed has fifteen peaks. It took me about ten and half hours to get to the top. On my way to the top, I was half minded to give up the adventure. With the company of my friends, as well as their courage, I had the endurance to reach the top. We stopped half way up the the mountain. I began to feel short of oxygen and I was getting fatigued. It seemed to me it was a dangerous adventure even though the mountain was only half as high as the .
The old man led Buck to the bed room, which was in second floor. A steel engraving of a building was hung above the fire place. He recollected that he had been in that building before. It used to be a church before the revolution. When Buck had no interest to buy the engraving, he went out side the store. The store had been in business for thirty years. It took some effort for him to walk when his heavy paperweight was against his thigh. The paperweight was an expensive antique. As Buck crossed the street, he saw someone follow him. He knew that person who worked with him in the same company
A mad dog rushed into a giant dog as the giant dog used to do that.
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The mountain that I climbed has fifteen peaks. It took me about ten and half hours to get to the top. On my way to the top, I was half minded to give up the adventure. With the company of my friends, as well as their courage, I had the endurance to reach the top. We stopped half way up the the mountain. I began to feel short of oxygen and I was getting fatigued. It seemed to me it was a dangerous adventure even though the mountain was only half as high as the .
The old man led Buck to the bed room, which was in second floor. A steel engraving of a building was hung above the fire place. He recollected that he had been in that building before. It used to be a church before the revolution. When Buck had no interest to buy the engraving, he went out side the store. The store had been in business for thirty years. It took some effort for him to walk when his heavy paperweight was against his thigh. The paperweight was an expensive antique. As Buck crossed the street, he saw someone follow him. He knew that person who worked with him in the same company
A mad dog rushed into a giant dog as the giant dog used to do that.
Thank you
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When the pill stuck (wording) in Jay's mouth, he felt it melting and (parallel) bitter taste . It dissolved quickly when he drank some water. The mountain that I climbed has fifteen peaks.
- When the pill stuck (wording) in Jay's mouth, he felt it melting and (parallel) bitter taste .
- It dissolved quickly when he drank some water.
- The mountain that I climbed has fifteen peaks.
- It took me about ten and half hours to get to the top.
- On my way to the top, I was half minded to give up the adventure.
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When the pill stuck (wording) in Jay's mouth, he felt it melting and (parallel) bitter taste. It dissolved quickly when he drank some water.
The mountain that I climbed has fifteen peaks. It took me about ten and half hours to get to the top. On my way to the top, I was half minded to give up the adventure. With the company of my friends, as well as their courage
The mountain that I climbed has fifteen peaks. It took me about ten and half hours to get to the top. On my way to the top, I was half minded to give up the adventure. With the company of my friends, as well as their courage
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JulielaiA mad dog was new to the family who owned an old giant dog and others. The old dog was jealous of the mad dog, which had great instinct of fighting and and was strong. Beside this, the owner began to favor the mad dog because it could help
A mad dog rushed into a giant dog as the giant dog used to do that. (what does that mean?)
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