proofreading#6

It is the third longest river in the world. One third of the entire nation lives by this river, which is about 4,000 miles long. The scenery is spectaular there. The biggest dam, which will be finished by 2012, is to stop its flooding in many parts. The good thing about the dam is that it prevents flooding and the bad thing about the dam is that a lot of archaeological and cultural places have been, and would be, destroyed. It was a fantastic experience when I was on the boat in the river. I can see an endless range of mountains on both sides of the river.

Boxer always followed his two maxims, which were I would work harder, and the leader was always right. The windmill had been destroyed by the enemies. The community wanted to build another one. Boxer got up every morning to bring stones from the quarry although his friends advised him that he should take some rest. Boxer would be eligible for retirement next month. He ignored his friends’ advice. One day, a couple of men came down from the quarry, saying that Boxer was fallen. Half of community went up to see him and saw him lying down on the grass. Someone went to inform the foremen and he immediately called the ambulance.

It was a golden book that Howard always carried. He got his sources for his writing from it. The idea of the book he had written was parallel to the idea he learned from his mentor. The characters were almost the same yet the outcome was quite different. He resisted that was not plagiarism. When his new book came out, the critics were hysterical. They condemned the book, which corrupted the youth.

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