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It was dreary-looking outside as rain was pouring down.The moon was the only light that shone over the big tree near the pool. I was looking across the pool where some ducks were swimming. I embraced my knees and put my chin on them, and looking down into the water. As I was patiently waiting my friend to give me umbrella, I heard someone shouting my name. It was my friend Joe who quietly came behind me.
Sitting near the pond, I was thinking about my aunt Judy. She often baked cookies to Joe and me.
The animals in the farm were hard than ever. They lacked food after long drought. Jones unwillingly had to reduce each animal's rations. On the other hand, some of them worked hard than ever, especially horses. They worked from dawn until sunset.
Spending time in Hong Kong was fun. I went to sightseeing on the second day. I saw many skyscraper buildings as well as landmarks. I rodd on an escalator, which was two feet long. On the third day, I went to horse race track which was in the heart of Hong Kong.
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Sitting near the pond, I was thinking about my aunt Judy. She often baked cookies to Joe and me.
The animals in the farm were hard than ever. They lacked food after long drought. Jones unwillingly had to reduce each animal's rations. On the other hand, some of them worked hard than ever, especially horses. They worked from dawn until sunset.
Spending time in Hong Kong was fun. I went to sightseeing on the second day. I saw many skyscraper buildings as well as landmarks. I rodd on an escalator, which was two feet long. On the third day, I went to horse race track which was in the heart of Hong Kong.
Thank you
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The moon was the only light that shone over the big tree near the pool. I was looking across the pool where some ducks were swimming. ) my chin on them, and looking down into the water.
- The moon was the only light that shone over the big tree near the pool.
- I was looking across the pool where some ducks were swimming.
- ) my chin on them, and looking down into the water.
- As I was patiently waiting my friend to give me __ (article) umbrella, I heard someone shouting my name.
- It was my friend Joe who quietly came behind me.
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It was dreary-looking outside as rain was pouring down.The moon was the only light that shone over the big tree near the pool. I was looking across the pool where some ducks were swimming. I embraced my knees and put (rested?) my chin on them, and looking down into the water. As I was patiently waiting my friend to give me __ (article)
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