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BW2/3 Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

proofreading#24

The primate animals showed their soulful and fearful on his eyes when I looked at them. The gibbons have been captivated in the zoo for a long time. The zoo provides them with couples of acre to live. Sometimes the zoo employees give food to them through gird fences. It is sort of animals and humans interacting. Their hands are agile and dexterous. They swing all days long on the bars. The animals are monogamous. They are very family oriented. A visitor can tell which female or male gibbon is. The mother always cares about its babies



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Every time John bites his lips he is being blocked to get into his most favorite Website. This means that the action of his biting his lips causes him to be blocked. You have it the wrong way round.

— Nona the brit

  • Every time John bites his lips he is being blocked to get into his most favorite Website.
  • This means that the action of his biting his lips causes him to be blocked.
  • You have it the wrong way round.
  • He knows he has to try as much as he would like.
  • 'as hard as he can' freaking-desire.
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Every time John bites his lips he is being blocked to get into his most favorite Website.
This means that the action of his biting his lips causes him to be blocked. You have it the wrong way round.

He knows he has to try as much as he would like. 'as hard as he can'

freaking-desire. hyphen is incorrect and also freaking would be taken as a euphamism for certain swear word
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Nona The BritEvery time John bites his lips he is being blocked to get into his most favorite Website. This means that the action of his biting his lips causes him to be blocked. You have it the wrong way round. .
Thank you Nona,

How do I fix it?
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Nona The BritEvery time John bites his lips he is being blocked to get into his most favorite Website. This means that the action of his biting his lips causes him to be blocked. You have it the wrong way round. He knows he has to try as much as he would like. 'as hard as he can' freaking-desire. hyphen is incorrect and also freaking would be taken as a euphamism for cert
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John bites his lips everytime he is blocked from his favourite website.

Darkjackass - what don't you understand?This is nothing to do with animal rights.
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I think Darkjackass is confused in that this posting starts with a piece about gibbons, whereas "proofreading#25" is the piece about being blocked from the website
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oh gosh how did that happen? Sorry!
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Feebs11I think Darkjackass is confused in that this posting starts with a piece about gibbons, whereas "proofreading#25" is the piece about being blocked from the website
in fact , first look don't understand what are talk about in this paragraphe, i can saying sorry for i come here
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