proofreading#17

The sky was becoming dark when he was leaving his house to take an evening walk. He looked up the sky which was gray. Then he extended his right palm hand to see if was raining. He was walking up the street, with his soda, beef jerk and chips. When John finished up his chips, he began to eat beef jerks. He chewed it hard. After a while, he went into a bakery store because he liked to see a girl who worked there. The girl beamed happily at him and asked him how he was doing lately. John anwered her, smiling back, and ordering a pastry and a cup of lemon tea. As soon as he was about to walk off the store, the girl went up to him to see if he would like to go to a concert with her on the next Sunday. As John was eating the pastry, he said 'yes'. He walked across the street while he turned his volume high on his I-pod for his favorite song. There was a little drizzle when he was almost at the supermarket. He went to the store and grabbed the items that his mom wanted him to buy. The cashier knew John because they had a chemistry class together. She talked to John about her birthday party and invited him to come on Sunday. John declined the invitation because he was not free. After a few minutes, John past the ware store. Then he was hearing something from behind. He thought it was a dog barking so he turned his head back. Actually the ware store was closing his gate. When he was about three blocks away from his cozy home, the rain was impounding down the street. He was running and cursing himself why he did not bring umbrella. He looked all over street to find a shelter but there was none. He was drenched all over him. Also the gusty wind made him cold. John kept running until he came back home. When he took his clothes off, the rain from it was dribbling on the floor.

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