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Even though the actor Tom got bad publicity lately, I still rented his latest movie. It seemed to me that his own personal behavior that did not bother me a bit. The media criticized him that he jumped on the couch and talked about psychology on Today Show. Those two things hurt his image. In the movie that I watched, I thought he was such as a great talent and mesmerzing actor that drew audiences to see it.
The action in the movie that I watched was great but I could not from the story. In the end of the movie, I really did not know what the movie was about yet I still remembered some cool action scenes.
One scene made me laugh when the arch villain was caught by Hunt. The villain threatened to slowly torture Hunt's wife in front of him and then he would killed him later. It was inconceivable that the villain would do that while captured/imprisoned. The villain made Hunt furious.
I thought the movie was trafficking in chemical weapons and IMF agents prvented this kind of illegal activity.
Was it I or she when our relationship had gone sour?
She had a flowering moment before she gave birth after birth.
(last 2 sentences removed by mod as already posted and answered separately. Please don't double post)
The action in the movie that I watched was great but I could not from the story. In the end of the movie, I really did not know what the movie was about yet I still remembered some cool action scenes.
One scene made me laugh when the arch villain was caught by Hunt. The villain threatened to slowly torture Hunt's wife in front of him and then he would killed him later. It was inconceivable that the villain would do that while captured/imprisoned. The villain made Hunt furious.
I thought the movie was trafficking in chemical weapons and IMF agents prvented this kind of illegal activity.
Was it I or she when our relationship had gone sour?
She had a flowering moment before she gave birth after birth.
(last 2 sentences removed by mod as already posted and answered separately. Please don't double post)
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I've made a few corrections for you and highlighted some other parts that are incorrect and you need to work on. Even though the actor Tom got bad publicity lately, I still rented his latest movie. It seemed to me that his own personal behavior that did not bother me a bit (This sentence a bit odd with use of 'it seemed to me' followed by your opinion.
- I've made a few corrections for you and highlighted some other parts that are incorrect and you need to work on.
- Even though the actor Tom got bad publicity lately, I still rented his latest movie.
- It seemed to me that his own personal behavior that did not bother me a bit (This sentence a bit odd with use of 'it seemed to me' followed by your opinion.
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- The media criticized him that he jumped on the couch and talked about psychology on the Today Show.
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I've made a few corrections for you and highlighted some other parts that are incorrect and you need to work on.
Even though the actor Tom got bad publicity lately, I still rented his latest movie. It seemed to me that his own personal behavior that did not bother me a bit (This sentence a bit odd with use of 'it seemed to me' followed by your opinion. re-phra
Even though the actor Tom got bad publicity lately, I still rented his latest movie. It seemed to me that his own personal behavior that did not bother me a bit (This sentence a bit odd with use of 'it seemed to me' followed by your opinion. re-phra
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