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All of a sudden, the sky was in all dark. The wind was getting stronger. There was no one in the street except me. I sent my girlfriend home after seeing the show. I never thought about her neigborhood much until then. I began getting scare when I was driving down. The light was red when I braked my car. I saw some people pproaching me. They dressed like gangters clothees. I acceleated the car, not waiting the light to turn red. I saw them throwing bottles at me in the mirror.

Larry got hit in his brain when he was young. He couldn't live by himself. Fortunelly, his older brother Jake looked after him. They worked together in a farm which was five miles away from their home. Larry always had trouble remebering things. He loved to play mice. But every time he played them, they would die. Probably he squeezed them hard. After the boss fired them, they took off to another town. The bus driver left them a couple miles by the town. He was afraid to drive there because he was a color guy. People there disliked color people. Larry and Jake ambled the path and saw the lake.
  

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All of a sudden, the sky was dark as the wind was getting stronger. There was no one else in the street except me. I sent my girlfriend home after seeing the show.

  • All of a sudden, the sky was dark as the wind was getting stronger.
  • There was no one else in the street except me.
  • I sent my girlfriend home after seeing the show.
  • I never thought about her neighborhood much until then.
  • I began getting scared when I was driving down.
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All of a sudden, the sky was dark as the wind was getting stronger. There was no one else in the street except me. I sent my girlfriend home after seeing the show. I never thought about her neighborhood much until then. I began getting scared when I was driving down. When the light was turning red, I saw some people approaching me. They dressed in some kind of gangsters' clothes. I was scared to

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