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Pierre Boisvert Posted 10 years ago
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Secondly, the US embargoed China before for more than 20 years. Cuba’s embargo was similar to the latter. After many years, Cuba were still using the same old cars, the apartments were not as beautiful as before. The school was free but the quality could be better. The books and old and they can’t use new technology like the iPad. Also, the economy is weaker that the economy in Canada. In the BBC video, they can generate income with tourism industry by building resorts and offering services to them, they can afford a better life for their family. All in all, Cuba’s embargo decreases the Cuban people lifestyle but limiting their opportunity.

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Secondly, the US embargoed China before for more than 20 years. Cuba’s embargo was similar to that. the latter.

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  • Secondly, the US embargoed China before for more than 20 years.
  • Cuba’s embargo was similar to that.
  • the latter.
  • After many years, Cuba were was still using the same old cars, and people's the apartments were not as beautiful as before.
  • The S chool education was still fre e, but the quality could be have been better.
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Secondly, the US embargoed China before for more than 20 years. Cuba’s embargo was similar to that. the latter. After many years, Cuba were was still using the same old cars, and people's the apartments were not as beautiful as before. The School education was still free, but the quality could be
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You're welcome, Pierre.
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I forgot to post the first paragraph. I know I am asking more than the average but thanks if you correct it.
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The embargo had a negative impact on the quality of life of Cubans population. Embargo had been done in many countries but Cuba was geographically close to the United States and this action from the United Stated affected deeply this small country. Cubans are highly educat
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Pierre BoisvertI forgot to post the first paragraph. I know I am may be asking too much, more than the average but thanks I'd be grateful if you could correct it.
The embargo had a negative impact on the quality of life of most of the Cuban population. Other countries had endured eco
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Thank you so much! I'm so happy with your help
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Pierre BoisvertThank you so much! I'm so happy with your help.
You're welcome.
Pierre Boisvertand the welfare started to decrease
Perhaps try,
and their standard of living started to deteriorate.
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