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MarieAndree1541 Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Proofreading of my cover letter

Hello, would someone please have a look at my cover letter:

Dear Hiring Manager,

I would like to express my interest in the Junior Web Developer position as advertised on Kijiji’s website. I am confident that I am the perfect candidate for this position.

Being a web designer and junior developer I have a passion for all things internet and design related. I recently graduated from Red River College with a certificate in Software Development and also audited for PHP courses at NAIT.

As I was reading the task description of the posted job, I became increasingly interested. I would love to gain more experience in the field and am a motivated learner. I quickly adapt to the work methods and routines of my employers and I am a fast and motivated learner.

I have attributes that would make me an asset to your company. A knack for working both independently and as a team player, the ability to meet deadlines, and a character that is approachable, yet hardworking and self-sufficient.

I thank you for your time and consideration, and I hope to speak with you further about my qualifications. Please see my enclosed resume, and also feel free to view my online portfolio at
www.site.com.

Yours sincerely,
Marie
  

Top answer

Dear Hiring Manager, I would like to express my interest in the Junior Web Developer position as advertised on Kijiji’s website. I am confident that I am the perfect candidate for this position. That is really boring.

  • Dear Hiring Manager, I would like to express my interest in the Junior Web Developer position as advertised on Kijiji’s website.
  • I am confident that I am the perfect candidate for this position.
  • That is really boring.
  • You are not a boring person, are you?
  • Compare with this opening statement: I am confident that I am the perfect candidate for the Junior Web Developer position you advertised on Kijiji’s website and let me convince you why.
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Dear Hiring Manager,

I would like to express my interest in the Junior Web Developer position as advertised on Kijiji’s website. I am confident that I am the perfect candidate for this position.

That is really boring. You are not a boring person, are you?
Compare with this opening statement:
I am confident that I am the perfect candidate for the Junior Web Deve

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