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Changeling Posted 18 years ago
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Hi everybody!
Could you, please, check my sentences. I’m writing the article for English version of a Russian health website. I want to make sure my English sounds like English
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Many girls like to sprawl out in the sun, reckless to protect their skin. Of course, sun light is good for us to a certain extend and various sunscreens protect the skin well enough. That encourages sunbathers to stay longer in the sun in hope of a perfect tan. So how do we know when it's time to retreat in shadow?
Thanks in advance
Could you, please, check my sentences. I’m writing the article for English version of a Russian health website. I want to make sure my English sounds like English
)Many girls like to sprawl out in the sun, reckless to protect their skin. Of course, sun light is good for us to a certain extend and various sunscreens protect the skin well enough. That encourages sunbathers to stay longer in the sun in hope of a perfect tan. So how do we know when it's time to retreat in shadow?
Thanks in advance
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Many people like to sprawl out in the sun, reckless of protecting their skin. Of course, sunlight is good for us to a certain extent, and sunscreens protect the skin well enough , so sunbathers are encouraged to stay longer in the sun in hope of a perfect tan . But how do we know when it's time to retreat into the shade ?
- Many people like to sprawl out in the sun, reckless of protecting their skin.
- Of course, sunlight is good for us to a certain extent, and sunscreens protect the skin well enough , so sunbathers are encouraged to stay longer in the sun in hope of a perfect tan .
- But how do we know when it's time to retreat into the shade ?
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Many people like to sprawl out in the sun, reckless of protecting their skin. Of course, sunlight is good for us to a certain extent, and sunscreens protect the skin well enough, so sunbathers are encouraged to stay longer in the sun in hope of a perfect tan. But how do we know when it's time to retreat into the shade?
Many people like to sprawl out in the sun, reckless of protecting their skin. Of course, sunlight is good for us to a certain extent, and sunscreens protect the skin well enough, so sunbathers are encouraged to stay longer in the sun in hope of a perfect tan. But how do we know when it's time to retreat into the shade?
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