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Changeling Posted 18 years ago
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Hi everybody!
Could you, please, check my sentences. I’m writing the article for English version of a Russian health website. I want to make sure my English sounds like English
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Maintaining a good eye sight throughout the life is challenging. Right diet is what will make the task easier.
Having perfect eyesight in youth doesn't mean you will see as clear when you become a senior. 30% of seniors worldwide who turn 65 years of age suffer from different eyesight diseases. This figure goes up to 50% among people 80 years of age. While some disease can be cured, the others cause blindness
Thanks in advance
Could you, please, check my sentences. I’m writing the article for English version of a Russian health website. I want to make sure my English sounds like English
)Maintaining a good eye sight throughout the life is challenging. Right diet is what will make the task easier.
Having perfect eyesight in youth doesn't mean you will see as clear when you become a senior. 30% of seniors worldwide who turn 65 years of age suffer from different eyesight diseases. This figure goes up to 50% among people 80 years of age. While some disease can be cured, the others cause blindness
Thanks in advance
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Maintaining good eyesight throughout life is challenging. Correct diet will make the task easier. Having perfect eyesight in youth doesn't mean you will be able to see as clearly when you become a senior citizen .
- Maintaining good eyesight throughout life is challenging.
- Correct diet will make the task easier.
- Having perfect eyesight in youth doesn't mean you will be able to see as clearly when you become a senior citizen .
- Thirty percent of seniors worldwide 65 years of age suffer from eye diseases .
- This figure goes up to 50% among people 80 years of age.
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Maintaining good eyesight throughout life is challenging. Correct diet will make the task easier. Having perfect eyesight in youth doesn't mean you will be able to see as clearly when you become a senior citizen. Thirty percent of seniors worldwide 65 years of age suffer from eye diseases. This figure goes up to 50% among people
Maintaining good eyesight throughout life is challenging. Correct diet will make the task easier. Having perfect eyesight in youth doesn't mean you will be able to see as clearly when you become a senior citizen. Thirty percent of seniors worldwide 65 years of age suffer from eye diseases. This figure goes up to 50% among people
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