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Marie 1541 Posted 9 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Proofreading my job description

Hello,

I am looking for someone who can proofread my job description. English is not my first language, so I struggle with time verbs. Below is the text to proof:

I am now working on the weekly flyers, newspaper press ads and In-Store POS are currently some of my responsibilities while ensuring brand consistency. I am also uploading media files on the company's website (Wordpress) and communicating with the department’s directors on a daily basis.

Thank you!
  

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That does not sound like a job description, but your current activities or projects. I am now working on the weekly flyers and newspaper press ads. ) the i n-store point-of-sale systems.

  • That does not sound like a job description, but your current activities or projects.
  • I am now working on the weekly flyers and newspaper press ads.
  • ) the i n-store point-of-sale systems.
  • are currently some of my responsibilities while ensuring brand consistency .
  • ) on a daily basis.
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That does not sound like a job description, but your current activities or projects.

I am now working on the weekly flyers and newspaper press ads.
I update (?) the in-store point-of-sale systems.
are currently some of my responsibilities while ensuring brand
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Hello AlpheccaStars,

Thank you very much for replying to me.

I am now working on the weekly flyers and newspaper press ads.
I update (?) the in-store point-of-sale systems.
are currently some of my responsibilities while ensuring brand consistency
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Hello AlpheccaStars,

Thank you very much for replying to me.

I tried to re-write my little paragraph.Could you please tell me if it's better?

My responsibilities are to work on the weekly flyers, newspaper press ads and in-store (pos) point of sale. Following the brand guidelines of t
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You need to study the possessive forms

department = one department
director = one director
department's director = one department which has one director; the director of that one department

departments = more than one department
departments' director = one director is the boss for more than one department
directors = more than one director
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