Proofreading? Cellphone is one of the most interesting tool we can use at work.

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Cellphone is one of the most interesting tool we can use at work.Office are full of technologies like printers, computers, fax, phones, etc. After a couple of months in an office, I think the most powerful tool is the cellphone for the communication capability. Before the cellphone, people were communicating by email or fax; this was slow and not easy to get quick answer. This was a nightmare when the deadline was tight and people need to get connected quickly. With that tool, I easier to reach people around the world and at any time of the day. I only had to pay to unlock it worldwide and the world is now open for business. Another good point, the cellphone gathers quickly more information than other tools. During events, I can add new contact information or look online to find interesting information to tell to people. The bottom line is the cellphone provide an easier way to access to more information.Although, the cellphone can provide hedges for a small company, it can be a nightmare when it’s not use for what it was built. When I was working in a small company, I saw a lot of employee wasting their time on their device. Consequently, we had to block some websites on the Wi-Fi, so employee will decrease their time on their phone and be more productive. Another point is this device increase the risk of an accident. I have never seen an accident caused by a phone, but a good friend of mine saw an employee driving and texting and he crashed the car into the wall. This example is a good proof of the cellphone can make the working environment more dangerous.These were the advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones. In the end, it all depends on our usage. Cell phones are the most personal and important device to employee and we should make an optimal use of them with some limitations. ---Thank you so much! I know it's not a short text

Teechr · Accepted Answer

Pierre BoisvertThe cellphone is one of the most interesting tools we can use at work.

Where did you get this prompt from? I ask because people are not allowed to/don't typically use cellphones at work.

Pierre Boisvert · Answer

At my job, we can use it to listen music and call. This text is more on the corporate phone uses

Teechr · Answer

Pierre BoisvertBefore the cellphone, people were communicating by email or fax;

That's not true. Email is more recent than cellphones. Also, people had landlines before.

Pierre BoisvertAnother point is this device increase the risk of an accident. I have never seen an accident caused by a phone, but a good friend of mine saw an employee driving and texting and he crashed the car into the wall.

That's off topic. Your essay is about using cellphones at work.

I suggest you revise your text.

Pierre Boisvert · Answer

The cell phone is one of the most interesting tools we can use at work.

These days, offices are full of technologies like printers, computers, fax, phones, etc. After a couple of months in an office, I think the most powerful tool is the cell phone for the communication capability. Before the cell phone, people were communicating by email or landline; this was slow and not always easy to get quick answer. This was a nightmare when the deadline was tight and people need to get connected quickly. Landline, for instance, if you are not near your phone, we can’t answer it and that was a huge problem. With the cell phone, It’s easier to reach people around the world and at any time of the day. I only had to pay to unlock it worldwide and I can reach people by phone and email with the same device. Another good point, the cell phone gathers quickly more information than other tools. During events, I can add new contact information or look online to find interesting information to tell to people. The bottom line is the cell phone provide an easier way to access to information.

Although, the cell phone can provide hedges for a small company, it can be a nightmare when it’s not use for what it was built. When I was working in a small company, I saw a lot of employee wasting their time on their device. Consequently, we had to block some websites on the Wi-Fi, so employee will decrease their time on their phone and be more productive. Another point is this device increase the risk of an accident. I have never seen an accident caused by a phone, but a good friend of mine saw a delivery employee driving and texting just before he crashed the company’s car into the office’s building. This example is a good proof of the cell phone can make the working environment more dangerous.

These were the advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones. In the end, it all depends on our usage. Cell phones are the most personal and important device to employee and we should make an optimal use of them with some limitations.

Teechr · Answer

These days, offices are full of technologies like printers, computers, fax machines, phones, etc. After a couple of months of working in an office, I think the most powerful tool is the cellphone for the flexible communication capability it offers. Before the cellphone, ~~people~~ office ~~were~~ communication ng was mostly by ~~email~~ letter or landline calls; this was slow, and it was not always easy to get a quick answer, which was particularly difficult ~~This was a nightmare~~ when the deadline was tight and people needed to get connected quickly. With a landline, for instance, if you are often not near your phone we and can’t answer it in time, which can sometimes be ~~and that was~~ a huge problem. With the cellphone, It’s easier to reach people ~~around the world~~ anywhere and at any time of the day. I only had to pay a little to ~~unlock it worldwide~~ enable international dialing on my cellphone, and now I can reach people by phone and/or email with the same device. Another ~~good point,~~ advantage is that modern cellphones, and especially smartphones, ~~the cell phone gathers quickly~~ can store much more information than other tools. During events, I can add new contact information or look online to find interesting information to tell to people. The bottom line is the cellphone provides an ~~easier~~ easy way to access to information.

However, although, the cellphone can provide an edge for a small company over its competitors, it can be a ~~nightmare~~ detriment when it’s not used for its intended purpose. ~~what it was built.~~ When I was working in a small company, I saw a lot of employees wasting their time on their cellphones. ~~device.~~ Consequently, we the company had to block some websites on the Wi-Fi so to stop employees ~~will decrease their~~ spending too much time on their phone and to encourage them to be more productive. Another point is ~~this device~~ cellphones can increase the risk of an accidents. I have never seen an accident caused by a phone, but a good friend of mine saw a delivery employee driving and texting just before he crashed the company car into the office building. This is a good example ~~is a good proof~~ of how the inappropriate use of cellphones can make the work ~~ing~~ environment unsafe. ~~more dangerous.~~

To sum up, ~~These were the~~ there are advantages and disadvantages ~~of mobile~~ to cellphones in the workplace. ~~In the end,~~ Ultimately, it all depends on how we use them. ~~our usage.~~ I believe that cellphones are ~~the most personal~~ a useful and important communication device to an employee can have, and we should, therefore, regulate their use at work. ~~make an optimal use of them with some limitations.~~

Pierre Boisvert · Answer

Thanks for this again! I would like to know how my text is? Is it **** or overall it's good enough?

Teechr · Answer

Pierre Boisvert**** ... good enough

These are arbitrary to say the least! I can tell you that you're improving. The most important thing is to learn from your mistakes and not repeat them.Keep going.

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