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Petusek Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Proofreading: articles, numbers, complex sentence structure
Hello!
Could somebody please look at the following and check the articles, numbers and sentence structure (spotting errors will suffice, but any suggestions are welcome).
"An integral part of the handling of all business transactions is their evaluation. In the XY Information System there are a wide range of standard reports that answer questions as to what goods are purchased the most often and by which customers, what sales are made each day, providing statistics on what customers demand, but do not purchase, etc. The information from these reports is highly valuable for future planning of production or purchase."
Many thanks!
P.
Could somebody please look at the following and check the articles, numbers and sentence structure (spotting errors will suffice, but any suggestions are welcome).
"An integral part of the handling of all business transactions is their evaluation. In the XY Information System there are a wide range of standard reports that answer questions as to what goods are purchased the most often and by which customers, what sales are made each day, providing statistics on what customers demand, but do not purchase, etc. The information from these reports is highly valuable for future planning of production or purchase."
Many thanks!
P.
Top answer
It's pretty good. ", at least. "An integral part of the handling of all business transactions is their evaluation.
- It's pretty good.
- ", at least.
- "An integral part of the handling of all business transactions is their evaluation.
- In the XY Information System there are a wide range of standard reports that answer questions such as what goods are purchased the most often and by which customers, what sales are made each day, and what goods customers demand but do not purchase.
- "
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It's pretty good. I would make the list self-consistent and kill the ugly "etc.", at least.
"An integral part of the handling of all business transactions is their evaluation. In the XY Information System there are a wide range of standard reports that answer questions such as what goods are purchased the most often and by which customers, what sales are made each day, and what goods cust
"An integral part of the handling of all business transactions is their evaluation. In the XY Information System there are a wide range of standard reports that answer questions such as what goods are purchased the most often and by which customers, what sales are made each day, and what goods cust
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