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Tareq mokbel Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

Proofreading a Motivation Letter

Dear all,

I prepared a motivation letter for a PhD position in Catholic University. Can some one proofread it please? This would be highly appreciated.

Thank you,

Tareq Mokbel
  

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Thank you Anonymous, here it is.

Dear Doctor X,
I am writing to apply for the PhD candidate position that you announced for in Y University website.
The use of mathematical modeling and simulation are of my best approaches which developed in me because of my passion for math that grew in me since I was in school because of the time and efforts I spent studying. That developed my a

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