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Would you please take a look at the following statement?
One of the advantages for this mall is the fact that they have a terrace, which allows visitors to do shopping in the open air.
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One of the advantages of this mall is its terrace, which allows visitors to shop in the open air. "Of" over "for": "For" sees the advantage from the mall's point of view, and if that's what you meant, then "for" is better. Every time you see you have written "the fact that", recast.
- One of the advantages of this mall is its terrace, which allows visitors to shop in the open air.
- "Of" over "for": "For" sees the advantage from the mall's point of view, and if that's what you meant, then "for" is better.
- Every time you see you have written "the fact that", recast.
- It is textbook wordy.
- "To do shopping" is not natural.
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One of the advantages of this mall is its terrace, which allows visitors to shop in the open air.
"Of" over "for": "For" sees the advantage from the mall's point of view, and if that's what you meant, then "for" is better.
Every time you see you have written "the fact that", recast. It is textbook wordy.
"To do shopping" is not natural.
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