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What do you like most about your hometown?

There are a lot of things in my hometown, and local food is one of my favorite things. "Banh xeo" is popular food in Qui Nhon, and the tourists can see this type of food everywhere in my hometown. It is a tasty dish made from crispy fried savory pancakes stuffed with seafood, meats and eaten with vegetables. Seafood is also considered to be one of the popular and delicious local food to foreigners. There are many restaurants that serve the best fresh-from- the-sea food, and the supply of the food is directly taken from the sea.

Describe about my house.

I love my house a lot because it becomes fond of during my childhood. It is located on Tran Luong street near the center. The house is quite wide and almost full of furniture. The front garden is built quite meticulously and based on my mother's interests. She often plants vegetables in the garden in front of the house, so most of the food is guaranteed in terms of the quality and safety for my whole family. My parents also raise chickens for eggs in the back garden. Additionally, my house includes two bedrooms, a living room, a bathroom and a kitchen. The first room is the living room where my family welcomes my parents' guests. Next to the living rooms are two bedrooms. The kitchen is the place in which my mother often cooks and prepared every meal for my family. It is also filled with all modern facilities, and behind the kitchen is the bathroom. The bathroom is quite a clean and wide room.

What is your favorite transport?

My favorite mode of transportation trains. First of all, traveling by train can be a reliable way to reach your destination on time while enjoying the local scenery. During traveling, I can spend my time reading a book, or listening to music or even simply looking out of the window. Sometimes, using this mode of transportation gives me more time to talk with my friends, or had a new experience of meeting new people. It is said that People who commute on the same train every day even make long-lasting friendships. Additionally, people usually knit a sweater, help their kid with homework, and even applying makeup on the train. Moreover, the advantage of traveling by train is to facilitate the transportation of large and heavy items of luggage. Last but not least, compared to other transportation, the train is the fastest and safest way to reach any town in my country. It is also a much cheaper way than using the car for traveling purpose because I have to pay costs such as gas and accommodation.

Which country would you like to visit?

One of the many countries I want to visit Korea, because of the following many reasons. First to all, it is undoubted that Korean food is my favorite cuisine compared to other types of food in the world. Korean barbecue is the most traditional meal around and it’s always prepared in top-notch quality. Furthermore, most of the Korean food is grown in the local farm to ensure the quality and safety of the products. Also, Busan is the second largest city in South Korea, and the beaches are considered to be one of the famous tourist trap because of its pristine beauty as well as the fresh atmosphere around them. It is also famous for its fresh seafood - specifically octopus. Moreover, Korean people are so awesome. Moreover, they are very open minded, friendly, and welcoming. I am quite impressed with the incredible Korean hospitality and friendliness.

Why it is bad for students to have a part time job?

A part-time job takes students a lot of time after school. The students who have a part-time job might lose the chance to make friends, and build up interpersonal relationships. Moreover, doing a lot of part-time jobs also affect student's health due to some reasons. Firstly, the students have to stay up late to do their homework or reports, and then they might use their rest time to work. Finally, their immunity against disease might decrease. Therefore, having a part-time job without a balance between studying and working can cause harm for the student. Also, they might miss the classes because of the insufficient rest and sleep. Additionally, most of those students have less time to prepare and review lessons, and the important thing is that they will not have the energy enough to study hard.