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Smithjohn Posted 9 years ago
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A railroad worker, Ma Yuan, who leads a team of freedom fighters to derail the Japanese war effort by using his deep knowledge of the train network when they decide to ambush soldiers and stealing supplies and provisions to help poor and starving locals. Unarmed and outnumbered, they must fight back against an entire army using only their wits.
  

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A railroad worker, Ma Yuan, leads a team of freedom fighters to derail the Japanese war effort by using his knowledge of the train network. They decide to ambush soldiers and steal provisions to help poor, starving locals. Unarmed and outnumbered, they must fight an entire army using only their wits.

  • A railroad worker, Ma Yuan, leads a team of freedom fighters to derail the Japanese war effort by using his knowledge of the train network.
  • They decide to ambush soldiers and steal provisions to help poor, starving locals.
  • Unarmed and outnumbered, they must fight an entire army using only their wits.
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A railroad worker, Ma Yuan, leads a team of freedom fighters to derail the Japanese war effort by using his knowledge of the train network. They decide to ambush soldiers and steal provisions to help poor, starving locals. Unarmed and outnumbered, they must fight an entire army using only their wits.

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