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Alex was born with a physical disability. He has to live with her mother because of this disability and he is a man who stays stuck in life by losing interest in everything dy by day. He has so many dreams that he thinks will never happen. With the thought which he thinks he imposes her mother, he is detached from life. But Mark is a sculptor who leaves home to make real his ideals and tries to stand on his own legs. He makes cartooning in his novels for a living and he has a good relationship which he thinks it goes on well. But that he is left by his girlfriend and that he losts his work turn his life upside-down. Mark and Alex's ways crosses with their dreams and this coindience makes them reborn.

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Alex was born with a physical disability. He has to live with her his mother because of this disability and he is a man who stays stuck can't get far in life by losing because he loses interest in everything d a y by day. He has so many dreams that he thinks will never materialize.

  • Alex was born with a physical disability.
  • He has to live with her his mother because of this disability and he is a man who stays stuck can't get far in life by losing because he loses interest in everything d a y by day.
  • He has so many dreams that he thinks will never materialize.
  • happen.
  • With the thought which he thinks he imposes her mother, he is detached from life.
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Alex was born with a physical disability. He has to live with her his mother because of this disability and he is a man who stays stuck can't get far in life by losing because he loses interest in everything day by day. He has so many dreams that he thinks will never materialize. happen.

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