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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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Dear Ms. Brown,
We are a manufacturer of plastic products. Our company has increasingly expanded lately, so we need a larger premise to adapt to our rapid development.
Regarding to your advertisement in the XXX newspaper, we would like to query some information concerning the Waterside Industry Park.
Firstly, could you please tell us whether there are other companies in the area and what sizes of the units available for rental?
In addition, with regards to the financial help mentioned in the leaflet, could you please inform us the requirements? And we would appreciate it if you could email us the application forms.
Finally, we also want to know about the skilled labor costs compared with other areas.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Mia Clown
Jessica Ltd
Thank You.
Dear Ms. Brown,
We are a manufacturer of plastic products. Our company has increasingly expanded lately, so we need a larger premise to adapt to our rapid development.
Regarding to your advertisement in the XXX newspaper, we would like to query some information concerning the Waterside Industry Park.
Firstly, could you please tell us whether there are other companies in the area and what sizes of the units available for rental?
In addition, with regards to the financial help mentioned in the leaflet, could you please inform us the requirements? And we would appreciate it if you could email us the application forms.
Finally, we also want to know about the skilled labor costs compared with other areas.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Mia Clown
Jessica Ltd
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Dear Ms. Brown, We are a manufacturer of plastic products. Our company has been steadily growing, increasingly expanded lately, so we nee d l arger premis es to adapt to our accommodate our rapid growth.
- Dear Ms.
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- Our company has been steadily growing, increasingly expanded lately, so we nee d l arger premis es to adapt to our accommodate our rapid growth.
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- Regarding to your advertisement in the *** newspaper, we would like to query some information concerning inquire about the Waterside Industry Park.
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