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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Proofreading?
Hi teachers, please help me correct my letter if there are any mistakes.
Thank you.
Dear Mr. Garden,
With regards to next week’s delegation visit, I have made a reservation for you in the Orange Hotel for four nights. This five-star hotel has a high reputation of excellent service as well as the delicious foods which can cater for the different tastes of its clients. In addition, our company driver, Mr. Horseman, will meet and greet you at the airport on your arrival.
Besides, please prepare a presentation on Banana’s digital office system to the Board of Directors on Wednesday morning. I will email the agenda to you late tonight.
Furthermore, it would be our honor to invite you to our company annual party on Friday evening. So, could you please let me know whether you want us to book an extra night at the hotel?
Let me know if you have any problems, and we look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Regards,
Paul Field
Thank you.
Dear Mr. Garden,
With regards to next week’s delegation visit, I have made a reservation for you in the Orange Hotel for four nights. This five-star hotel has a high reputation of excellent service as well as the delicious foods which can cater for the different tastes of its clients. In addition, our company driver, Mr. Horseman, will meet and greet you at the airport on your arrival.
Besides, please prepare a presentation on Banana’s digital office system to the Board of Directors on Wednesday morning. I will email the agenda to you late tonight.
Furthermore, it would be our honor to invite you to our company annual party on Friday evening. So, could you please let me know whether you want us to book an extra night at the hotel?
Let me know if you have any problems, and we look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Regards,
Paul Field
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I have underlined some problem areas (much of them because they should be omitted): Dear Mr. Garden, With regards to next week’s delegation visit, I have made a reservation for you in the Orange Hotel for four nights. This five-star hotel has a high reputation of excellent service as well as the delicious foods which can cater for the different tastes of its clients .
- I have underlined some problem areas (much of them because they should be omitted): Dear Mr.
- Garden, With regards to next week’s delegation visit, I have made a reservation for you in the Orange Hotel for four nights.
- This five-star hotel has a high reputation of excellent service as well as the delicious foods which can cater for the different tastes of its clients .
- In addition, our company driver, Mr.
- Horseman, will meet and greet you at the airport on your arrival.
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I have underlined some problem areas (much of them because they should be omitted):
Dear Mr. Garden,
With regards to next week’s delegation visit, I have made a reservation for you in the Orange Hotel for four nights. This five-star hotel has a high reputation of excellent service as well as the delicious foods which can cater for the different tastes of its clie
Dear Mr. Garden,
With regards to next week’s delegation visit, I have made a reservation for you in the Orange Hotel for four nights. This five-star hotel has a high reputation of excellent service as well as the delicious foods which can cater for the different tastes of its clie
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