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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
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Hi teachers, please help me correct my email if there are any mistakes. Thank you.

To: Rachel Bond
From: Janet James
Date: 10 October
Subject: Management Seminar

Dear Rachel,

I would like to update you on the booking for the Management Seminar on 19th of October.

Firstly, I wasn’t able to get the Russell Hotel because they were fully booked. However, I have made a reservation in the Jessica Hotel which is in the centre of Hong Kong; the location is very convenient.

Moreover, its basic price is the same as the Russell Hotel, but we can have a free buffet lunch. And, some of our staff who had been to this hotel praised them for their delicious food and service.

Finally, could you please send me a list of the equipment you need?

Please get back to me as soon as possible.

Regards,

Janet
  

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