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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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Hi teachers, please help me correct my letter if there are any mistakes.
Thank You~
Dear Mrs. Gupta,
Our company has a few security problems lately, so we have to review our delivery arrangements.
Please note that below are several changes we would like to make.
Firstly, instead of using the main gate, drivers should use the warehouse gate which is in the Bird Road.
Secondly, we are issuing IC cards to replace the general permits that your drivers are using at the moment. Drivers are supposed to place the IC card on the window screen to active the sensor in the gate. We sent the IC cards with courier this morning. If you haven’t received them, please contact Mr. Black, the secretary of Customer Service Department.
Finally, please inform your drivers that our company will stop manual access this Sunday. Consequently, there will only be automatic access to the yard since next Monday.
Please call me if you have any problems.
Regards,
Frank Bauer
Jessica Ltd
Thank You~
Dear Mrs. Gupta,
Our company has a few security problems lately, so we have to review our delivery arrangements.
Please note that below are several changes we would like to make.
Firstly, instead of using the main gate, drivers should use the warehouse gate which is in the Bird Road.
Secondly, we are issuing IC cards to replace the general permits that your drivers are using at the moment. Drivers are supposed to place the IC card on the window screen to active the sensor in the gate. We sent the IC cards with courier this morning. If you haven’t received them, please contact Mr. Black, the secretary of Customer Service Department.
Finally, please inform your drivers that our company will stop manual access this Sunday. Consequently, there will only be automatic access to the yard since next Monday.
Please call me if you have any problems.
Regards,
Frank Bauer
Jessica Ltd
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nekosama Our company has a few security problems lately , Do you think you can fix the tense? nekosama Please note that below are the several changes we would like to make. nekosama the warehouse gate which is in the Bird Road.
- nekosama Our company has a few security problems lately , Do you think you can fix the tense?
- nekosama Please note that below are the several changes we would like to make.
- nekosama the warehouse gate which is in the Bird Road.
- nekosama We sent the IC cards with the courier this morning.
- nekosama Consequently, there will only be automatic access to the yard since as of next Monday.
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nekosamaOur company has a few security problems lately,Do you think you can fix the tense?
nekosamaPlease notethatbelowarethe several changes we would like to make.
nekosamathe warehou
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teechrnekosamaOur company has a few security problems lately,
teechrDo you think you can fix the tense?Our company has been having a few security problems lately
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Excellent. 
You could have also used the present perfect simple "has had."
You could have also used the present perfect simple "has had."
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