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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Proofreading?

Hi teachers, please help me correct my note if there are any mistakes.
thank you!

Phil,

We have just got the sales literature for the London trade show next week, but there are some problems which I want you to deal with immediately.

Firstly, we need 100 more catalogues for racing wear. Many of our customers are interested in our products, especially the shorts and shoes.

Secondly, with regard to the pull-out leaflet for the new children’s cycles, there is a mistake on the third page. The specifications for the wheels are wrong, could you please revise that and send me the new copies by the weekend.

Finally, we are short of order forms for spare parts. Could you send us more as soon as possible?

Please don’t hesitate to contact me if you have any problems.

Thank you!

Sandra
  

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nekosama Firstly, we need 100 mor e race-wear catalogue s. nekosama The specifications for the wheels are wr on g. C oul d you please revise that and send me the new copies by the weeke n d?

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  • nekosama Firstly, we need 100 mor e race-wear catalogue s.
  • nekosama The specifications for the wheels are wr on g.
  • C oul d you please revise that and send me the new copies by the weeke n d?
  • I'm disappointed that you're still making these silly mistakes which would cost you valuable marks in a test.
  • Always check your work before submitting it!
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nekosama Firstly, we need 100 more race-wear catalogues.
nekosamaThe specifications for the wheels are wrong. Could you please revise that and send me the new copies by the weekend?
I'm disappoint
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