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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
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This report aims to recommend a solution to the problems with Jessica Technology Ltd, one of our suppliers.

We find that there are three essential problems should be addressed immediately:

The first one is late deliveries. There were 24 times of late deliveries, much more than last year, has caused great inconvenience.

Secondly, we are quite dissatisfied with the quality of their products. Our customers are complaining about this problem, which has affected our company’s image and reputation.

Nevertheless, errors with invoices also brought us a lot of trouble.

Generally speaking, with regard to costs, Jessica Technology Ltd charges us 20% more than other suppliers.

Consequently, I would recommend that we should turn to other suppliers and make it a rule to check all invoices from suppliers in future.

In conclusion, we suggest a meeting with Jessica Technology Ltd as soon as possible.
  

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This report recommends solutions to problems with our supplier,Jessica Technology Ltd Problems 1. There were 24 late deliveries this year, many more than last year. 2.

  • This report recommends solutions to problems with our supplier,Jessica Technology Ltd Problems 1.
  • There were 24 late deliveries this year, many more than last year.
  • 2.
  • Their products are of poor quality.
  • Our customers are complaining, which is affected our company’s image and reputation.
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This report recommends solutions to problems with our supplier,Jessica Technology Ltd

Problems
1. There were 24 late deliveries this year, many more than last year.

2. Their products are of poor quality. Our customers are complaining, which is affected our company’s image and reputation.

3. Their invoices contain errors.

4. They charge us 20% more th

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