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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
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MEMO

To: Jeff
From: Judy
Date: May 13
Subject: Delegation Visit

I would like to finalize the preparations for the delegation next Tuesday. You should make sure that everyone has a name badge and an information pack. The badges are done, but you need to arrange the pack with all the relevant information before this Saturday.

Furthermore, with regard to catering, I think lunch should be organized at 12:30. Please ring the Jessica Hotel and make a reservation for twelve people.

Our visitors will come straight from the station, and their taxi will bring them to the front gate. So make sure you are there to agree them at 10:00 am.

Then bring them to the reception; I want them to see the new design first.

Please call me if you have any problems.

Thank you!
  

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MEMO To: Jeff From: Judy Date: May 13 Subject: Delegation Visit I would like to finalize the preparations for the delegation next Tuesday 's visit by the delegation from XYZ . You should make sure that everyone has a name badge and an information pack. The badges are done, but you need to arrange the pac ks with all the relevant information before this Saturday.

  • MEMO To: Jeff From: Judy Date: May 13 Subject: Delegation Visit I would like to finalize the preparations for the delegation next Tuesday 's visit by the delegation from XYZ .
  • You should make sure that everyone has a name badge and an information pack.
  • The badges are done, but you need to arrange the pac ks with all the relevant information before this Saturday.
  • Furthermore, with regard to catering, I think lunch should be organized at 12:30.
  • Please ring the Jessica Hotel and make a reservation for twelve people.
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MEMO

To: Jeff
From: Judy
Date: May 13
Subject: Delegation Visit

I would like to finalize the preparations for the delegation next Tuesday's visit by the delegation from XYZ. You should make sure that everyone has a name badge and an information pack. The badges are done, but you need to arrange the packs with all the relevant information befor

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