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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
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Order 1234567
Dear Sirs,
Thank your for your letter of June 10th with which you enclosed your catalogues and price list.
We agree the quality and specifications of your products are satisfactory and we understand that you will allow a 10 % discount on an order worth HK $140,000 or more. We therefore enclose our official purchase order form No. 1234567 for a range of your products to the value of HK$ 145,000 and have instructed our bankers, the BabyJessica Bank Ltd, to open a confirmed irrevocable letter of credit through their correspondent bank, the XX Bank Ltd, Hong Kong for HK $ 134,125, payable at 60 days’ sight, in your favor.
We now look forward to hearing the order and to receiving a copy of the bill of lading through our bankers.
Yours faithfully,
Penny Shelton
Order 1234567
Dear Sirs,
Thank your for your letter of June 10th with which you enclosed your catalogues and price list.
We agree the quality and specifications of your products are satisfactory and we understand that you will allow a 10 % discount on an order worth HK $140,000 or more. We therefore enclose our official purchase order form No. 1234567 for a range of your products to the value of HK$ 145,000 and have instructed our bankers, the BabyJessica Bank Ltd, to open a confirmed irrevocable letter of credit through their correspondent bank, the XX Bank Ltd, Hong Kong for HK $ 134,125, payable at 60 days’ sight, in your favor.
We now look forward to hearing the order and to receiving a copy of the bill of lading through our bankers.
Yours faithfully,
Penny Shelton
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" ] Thank your for your letter of dated June 10th with which you enclosed your catalogues and price list. We agree the quality and specifications of your products are satisfactory and we understand that you will allow give a 10 % discount on an orde rs worth HK $140,000 or more. W e, therefor e, enclose our official purchase order form No.
- " ] Thank your for your letter of dated June 10th with which you enclosed your catalogues and price list.
- We agree the quality and specifications of your products are satisfactory and we understand that you will allow give a 10 % discount on an orde rs worth HK $140,000 or more.
- W e, therefor e, enclose our official purchase order form No.
- 1234567 for a range of your products to the value of HK $1 45,00 0, and we have instructed our bankers, the BabyJessica Bank Ltd, to open a confirmed irrevocable letter of credit through their correspondent bank, the XX Bank Ltd, Hong Kong for HK $1 34,125, payable at 60 days’ sight, in your favor.
- We now look forward to hearing the order and to receiving a copy of the bill of lading through our bankers.
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Re: Order 1234567
Dear Sir/Madam, [ I don't understand why you keep using "Dear Sirs." ]
Thank your for your letterof dated June 10th with which you enclosed your catalogues and price list.
We agree the quality and specifications of your products are satisfactory and we understand that you willallow
Dear Sir/Madam, [ I don't understand why you keep using "Dear Sirs." ]
Thank your for your letter
We agree the quality and specifications of your products are satisfactory and we understand that you will
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