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The aim of this report is to give an overview of the event our company decided to sponsor and present the benefits and the pitfalls.

Introduction to the event
‘Computer 2016’ was the third edition of annual event held in Manchester. Its goal is to present and promote the innovations in the IT field.

Its success
Designed to inform professionals, the event also reached the interest of the public. During the whole week, the guests took park very actively in the meetings, thereby demonstrating a huge and shared interest, and the public was nothing if not captivated by the demonstration and shows.

Unfortunately, the opening hours were relatively restrictive and it was difficult for the visitors to see everything.

The place of our company

As a widely recognized training services provider, we were offered in return of our sponsorship a place to promote our books and training programs, complemented by advertising areas.

We have been able to reach many potential customers as well as other companies interested in consolidating their staff’s knowledge.

Conclusions

Our company was well exposed and reached many new potential clients. There is no doubt that our future sales will benefit from the numerous contacts out staff made, and the return on investment is undoubtedly good and worth our sponsorship.

We should consider this type of action more often. But, as our staff is not used to this type of publicity, we should consider a special training in providing he company and its services before doing this type of action again.
  

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The aim of this report is to give an overview of the event our company decided to sponsor and present outline the benefits we received and the challenges we faced. pitfalls. Introduction to the event The annual ‘Computer 2016’ expo was the third edition of annual event held in Manchester last month .

  • The aim of this report is to give an overview of the event our company decided to sponsor and present outline the benefits we received and the challenges we faced.
  • pitfalls.
  • Introduction to the event The annual ‘Computer 2016’ expo was the third edition of annual event held in Manchester last month .
  • This was the third year for the event, and the Its goal is main focus this year was to present and promote the cutting-edge innovations in the IT field.
  • Its success Designed to inform professionals, the event also reached engaged the interest of the general public.
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The aim of this report is to give an overview of the event our company decided to sponsor and present outline the benefits we received and the challenges we faced. pitfalls.

Introduction to the event
The annual ‘Computer 2016’ expo was the third edition of annual event held in Manchester last month. This was

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