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The purpose of this report is to analyze the changes in turnover for three kinds of retail outlet, owned by one company, over a three-year period.
Findings
The overall highest turnover of eighty million pounds was obtained by supermarkets in 2012. On the other hand, the smallest turnover was made in small shops in 2011.
Over the year 2010, a turnover of 15 million pounds was reached in department stores, whereas it then plummeted to about 30 million pounds in 2011 and maintained this position throughout 2012.
The supermarkets turnover rose steadily from 2010, reaching its peak in 2012 with 80 million pounds.
Clearly, small shops had the smallest turnover altogether. 30 million pounds in 2010, a noticeable drop to 20 million in 2011, and a slight increase of 5 million in 2012.
Conclusion
In conclusion, the highest results were reached by supermarkets, followed by department stores and small shops.
The purpose of this report is to analyze the changes in turnover for three kinds of retail outlet, owned by one company, over a three-year period.
Findings
The overall highest turnover of eighty million pounds was obtained by supermarkets in 2012. On the other hand, the smallest turnover was made in small shops in 2011.
Over the year 2010, a turnover of 15 million pounds was reached in department stores, whereas it then plummeted to about 30 million pounds in 2011 and maintained this position throughout 2012.
The supermarkets turnover rose steadily from 2010, reaching its peak in 2012 with 80 million pounds.
Clearly, small shops had the smallest turnover altogether. 30 million pounds in 2010, a noticeable drop to 20 million in 2011, and a slight increase of 5 million in 2012.
Conclusion
In conclusion, the highest results were reached by supermarkets, followed by department stores and small shops.
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nekosama pounds I presume you're talking about money, right?
- nekosama pounds I presume you're talking about money, right?
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The purpose of this report is to analyze the changes in turnover for three kinds of retail outlet, owned by one company, over a three-year period.
Findings
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