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The report analyses the numbers of male and female managers in different age groups in CC Centre Ltd. The company employs almost an equal number of executives of both sexes. However, there are remarkable differences based on the age range considered.

Female executives dominate in the age group between 24 and 39, where the ratio is 42 to just 10, the first representing the number of women and the latter—men.

Nevertheless, in the age range above 40 male executives are in majority. Although in group 40 to 49 the split is slight, amongst older managers men starkly dominate.

The difference reaches 20 in range 50 to 59, with 39 male directors and 19 female directors. It decreases half in group 60 to 69, where 10 women hold top position in comparison to 21 men. Yet in the last age group, 70 to 79, female executives are absent.
It solely consists of 4 male managers.
  

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The report analyses the numbers of male and female managers in different age groups in CC Centre Ltd. The company employs almost an equal number of executives of both sexes. However, there are remarkable differences based on the age range considered.

  • The report analyses the numbers of male and female managers in different age groups in CC Centre Ltd.
  • The company employs almost an equal number of executives of both sexes.
  • However, there are remarkable differences based on the age range considered.
  • Female executives dominate in the 24-39 age grou p, between 24 and 39, where the ratio is 42 women to just 10 men.
  • , the first representing the number of women and the latter—men.
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The report analyses the numbers of male and female managers in different age groups in CC Centre Ltd. The company employs almost an equal number of executives of both sexes. However, there are remarkable differences based on the age range considered.

Female executives dominate in the 24-39 age group, between 24 and 39, where the ratio is 42 women to just 10

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