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Report on changes in CentralMetro’s reliability, punctuality and the number of complaints.

Findings

The study of train’s reliability, punctuality and the number of complaints has covered 12 weeks, which divided into three sub-periods.

In regards to reliability, there was slight increase in the second period, reaching the level of 90 percent and remained the same level for the rest of periods.

Conversely, in terms of punctuality, after having been recorded at a high score of 95% in the first period, it declined steadily in the two subsequent periods.

The number of complaints per 100,000 passenger journeys has reached the level of 2000 in the first 4 weeks.
In the following period it has slightly plummeted. During the last 4 weeks of the number of complaints rose sharply, peaking at a level around 240.

Conclusion

Generally speaking, it is clear that the constantly decreasing punctuality of trains leads to the increased number of complaints recorded in the last period.
  

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Report on the changes in CentralMetro’s reliabilit y and punctuality and the number of complaints against them . Findings The study of into the train’s reliability and punctuality and as well as the number of complaints against CentralMetro's train service has covered spanned 12 weeks, which and was divided into three sections. sub-periods.

  • Report on the changes in CentralMetro’s reliabilit y and punctuality and the number of complaints against them .
  • Findings The study of into the train’s reliability and punctuality and as well as the number of complaints against CentralMetro's train service has covered spanned 12 weeks, which and was divided into three sections.
  • sub-periods.
  • In regar d to reliability, there was a slight increase improvement in the second period, reaching the level of 90 percent and remained the same staying at that level for the rest of until the end of the study.
  • periods.
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Report on the changes in CentralMetro’s reliability and punctuality and the number of complaints against them.

Findings

The study of into the train’s reliability and punctuality and as well as the number of complaints against CentralMetro's train service has covered s

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