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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
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Report on staff recruitment
As our company is developing several new products, the department of Development and Design urgently need new staff to help design and monitor our products.
As a result, we need to recruit 40 new staff, including electrical engineers, software engineers, network engineers and product developers. All of them should have at least two years’ experience in relevant field. More specific requirement will finally be decided in a few days.
As to recruitment methods, the disadvantage of relying on recruitment agency is that we need more time and procedure than we can afford. So I suggest that we turn to a more direct way of newspaper advertisement, which has been used many times and proved effective.
Compared the two types of newspaper, CentralNews and StarsMap, we prefer the former because it charges $500 less than the latter, the general readers are 900,000 more, most of whom are highly-educated. We are sure to get reply soon after we launch the recruitment campaign.
Report on staff recruitment
As our company is developing several new products, the department of Development and Design urgently need new staff to help design and monitor our products.
As a result, we need to recruit 40 new staff, including electrical engineers, software engineers, network engineers and product developers. All of them should have at least two years’ experience in relevant field. More specific requirement will finally be decided in a few days.
As to recruitment methods, the disadvantage of relying on recruitment agency is that we need more time and procedure than we can afford. So I suggest that we turn to a more direct way of newspaper advertisement, which has been used many times and proved effective.
Compared the two types of newspaper, CentralNews and StarsMap, we prefer the former because it charges $500 less than the latter, the general readers are 900,000 more, most of whom are highly-educated. We are sure to get reply soon after we launch the recruitment campaign.
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You work for *** Ltd, a manufacturing company. You need more staff in your department and your line manager has asked you to write a report explaining why.
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nekosamawrite a report explaining why.In that case, your last two paragraphs are off topic. Try to elaborate on the reasons you need the extra staff.
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