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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
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Dear Mr. Watson,
With reference to your letter dated May 30th concerning rental for a new factory unit.
I am writing to inform you that our company, ABC Industrial Park, will meet your need. Firstly, our park is located immediately to the high way. The transportations here are very convenient; there is also a railway station around.
Secondly, our industrial park offers 24-hours security services and auto fire-resistant system.
Thirdly, we have enough parking places for staff parking, which can accommodate 300 vehicles. Furthermore, our electricity facilities were improved last year. Now we can offer whole day electricity supply.
Finally, I would like to tell you that if you have long-term rental with us, we will provide you with 10 percent discount for the first two years’ rental.
I do hope we can be your supplier in the future; please contact us at earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Jim Moriarty
Dear Mr. Watson,
With reference to your letter dated May 30th concerning rental for a new factory unit.
I am writing to inform you that our company, ABC Industrial Park, will meet your need. Firstly, our park is located immediately to the high way. The transportations here are very convenient; there is also a railway station around.
Secondly, our industrial park offers 24-hours security services and auto fire-resistant system.
Thirdly, we have enough parking places for staff parking, which can accommodate 300 vehicles. Furthermore, our electricity facilities were improved last year. Now we can offer whole day electricity supply.
Finally, I would like to tell you that if you have long-term rental with us, we will provide you with 10 percent discount for the first two years’ rental.
I do hope we can be your supplier in the future; please contact us at earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Jim Moriarty
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Dear Mr. Watson, With reference to your letter dated May 30th concerning rental for a new factory uni t, I am writing to inform you that our company, ABC Industrial Park, will meet your need. Firstly, our park is located immediately next to the hig hw ay.
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Dear Mr. Watson,
With reference to your letter dated May 30th concerning rental for a new factory unit, I am writing to inform you that our company, ABC Industrial Park, will meet your need. Firstly, our park is located immediately next to the highway.The Transportation here are is very convenient, and t
With reference to your letter dated May 30th concerning rental for a new factory unit, I am writing to inform you that our company, ABC Industrial Park, will meet your need. Firstly, our park is located immediately next to the highway.
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