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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
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hi, teachers, please help me correct my letter if there are any mistakes, THANK YOU!

Dear Bonnie,
I have just had a date for the opening of the new coffee shop at the side of the Green Arrow Theatre.
It’s May 1st so can you please inform of the local press? There will be an opening celebration at 7 pm with local residents invited.
By the way, it will also have Internet access so that is worth a mention too.
Unfortunately there isn’t a show on May 1st; but our musical Guys and Dolls starts on May 3rd so try to fit that in somewhere.
Moreover, there is a design of the coffee shop attached, please print them out as well.
Thank you!

Moon
  

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nekosama hi, teachers, please help me correct my letter if there are any mistakes, THANK YOU! First, I'd like you to correct the capitalization in the above.

— Teechr

  • nekosama hi, teachers, please help me correct my letter if there are any mistakes, THANK YOU!
  • First, I'd like you to correct the capitalization in the above.
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nekosama hi, teachers, please help me correct my letter if there are any mistakes, THANK YOU!
First, I'd like you to correct the capitalization in the above.
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hi, Hi teachers, please help me correct any mistakes you find in my letter. if there are any mistakes, THANK YOU! Thank You!

Dear Bonnie,

I have just had a set the date for the opening of the new coffee shop at the side of the Green Arrow Theatre.
It’s May 1st, so can you please inform of th
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