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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
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hi, teachers,could you correct my memo if there are mistakes, thank you!

Dear colleagues,

As I advised you in our last meeting, there will be a visit from health and safety inspections on Monday, 13th September from 10am until 4pm.
The inspection is necessary for our quality management certificate.
Please be prepared for the inspection by telling the staff to tidy up their workplace.
Regards

Sandy Brown
  

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Dear colleagues, As I advised you in our last meeting, there will be a visit from the health and safety authority/department/consultants to carry out an inspectio n on Monday, 13th September from 10am until 4pm. The inspection is necessary for our qualit y-m anagement certificate. Please be prepared for the inspection by telling instructing the staff to tidy up their workplace.

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  • Dear colleagues, As I advised you in our last meeting, there will be a visit from the health and safety authority/department/consultants to carry out an inspectio n on Monday, 13th September from 10am until 4pm.
  • The inspection is necessary for our qualit y-m anagement certificate.
  • Please be prepared for the inspection by telling instructing the staff to tidy up their workplace.
  • Regard s, Sandy Brown
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Dear colleagues,

As I advised you in our last meeting, there will be a visit from the health and safety authority/department/consultants to carry out an inspection on Monday, 13th September from 10am until 4pm.
The inspection is necessary for our quality-management certificate.
Please be prepared for the inspection by telling instructing
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