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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

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hi, teachers, please help me correct my note if there are any mistakes, thank you!

To:Walter Stone
From: Louisa Robinson
Date: July 20th, 2004
Subject: Warning about lateness

Mr. Stone,
I have noticed that you often arrive late for work, especially on Monday mornings. As your colleagues are starting to complain about that, you understand that unless this habit changes, I will take disciplinary action against you.
Come and see me tomorrow at 9 am in my office.
Thank you.
Louisa Robinson
  

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nekosama please help me correct my note if there are any mistakes, You don't need all that stuff at the beginning. Subject: Warning about lateness Dear Mr. Stone, We have noticed that you often arrive late for work, especially on Monday mornings.

— Mister Micawber

  • nekosama please help me correct my note if there are any mistakes, You don't need all that stuff at the beginning.
  • Subject: Warning about lateness Dear Mr.
  • Stone, We have noticed that you often arrive late for work, especially on Monday mornings.
  • As your colleagues are starting to complain, you should understand that unless this habit changes, we will have to take disciplinary action.
  • Please come and see me tomorrow at 9 am in my office.
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nekosamaplease help me correct my note if there are any mistakes,
You don't need all that stuff at the beginning.

Subject: Warning about lateness

Dear Mr. Stone,

We have noticed that you often arrive late for work, especially on Monday mornings. As your colleagues are starting to complain, you should understand that
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nekosamaDear Mr. Stone,
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Subject: Warning about punctuality.
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Anonymous * Subject: Warning about punctuality.
We don't really warn people when they are punctual.
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