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SeroMack Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Proofreading

At the request of my friend, I'm translating his short book for him (Polish to English). Can I ask you here for some proofreading (I would be pasting short passages of text)? Emotion: smile
  

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Here's the first part of the text. If you please... How much confidence *** placed in St.

  • Here's the first part of the text.
  • If you please...
  • How much confidence *** placed in St.
  • Joseph, for he entrusted to him his only Son, Jesus Christ, who became man.
  • As an eyewitness of how Joseph watches over our Congregation and Provincial House, I see how providential it was for sisters who worked hard and prayed assiduously to build not only the house at Bukowska but also the entire Poznan Congregation, to trust St.
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Here's the first part of the text. If you please...

How much confidence *** placed in St. Joseph, for he entrusted to him his only Son, Jesus Christ, who became man. As an eyewitness of how Joseph watches over our Congregation and Provincial House, I see how providential it was for sisters who worked hard and prayed assiduously to build not only the house at Bukowska but also the enti
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seroMackhis only son,
seroMackcongregation and provincial house,
seroMackI see how providential it was for sisters, who worked hard and prayed assiduously to build not only the house at Bukowska, but also the entire Poznan Congregation, to trust in St
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Thank you teechr! It was page 1 out of 17. I'm trying to do my best to finish it by the end of the month...

Here comes the next part:

I am reminded of a beautiful memory from childhood... While I am visiting the house of Sisters of St. Elizabeth in my hometown in Grodzisk Wielkopolski, I remember guests being welcomed by St. Joseph standing on the chest of drawers in
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Whenever I visit the convent of the Sisters of St. Elizabeth in my hometown of Grodzisk Wielkopolski, I am reminded of a beautiful memory from childhood. While I am visiting the house of Sisters of St. Elizabeth in my hometown in Grodzisk Wielkopolski, I remember guests being welcomed by a statue of St. Joseph, standing on the chest of drawers in the hall.
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I'm very grateful for your help, teechr.
So far I've (actually we) managed to translate 4 pages out of 17 - here they come if may ask you...
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I am convinced that regardless of the subject matter and the course of the chapter, St. Joseph got his attention through the events in Poznan, because again he wants to receive a management of the house, the house of hearts and lives of each of the sisters. he wants to take over the running of the congreg
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teechrI don't understand the highlighted bits. You need to rephrase them in a clearer way.
regardless of the subject matter and the course of the chapter, St. Joseph got his attention - here the author wants to say he is sure that no matter what was the topic of the discussions during the general chapter meeting in Rome (one might have thought it was th
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I am convinced that regardless of the topic of the discussions during the general chapter meeting in Rome, subject matter and the course of the chapter, St. Joseph got his own way attention through the events in Poznan, because again he wants to be the patron receive a management of the house - the house of hearts and lives of each
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Thank you, friend. I will continue tonight or tomorrow morning. I really appreciate your help.
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Ok. Here is up to page 7. Can I send you a private message?

"The most sublime example of confidence in the intercession of St. Joseph is the building of a motherhouse in Nysa. Facing the financial barrier, Mother Maria Luisa entrusted the work to the Head of the Holy Family (St. Joseph), and soon thanks to many donors the construction works of the motherhouse (the foundation stone of

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