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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
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hi, teachers, please help me correct my memo if there are any mistakes, thank you!

MEMORANDUM
To: All staff

From: James Stone

Date: 23rd June

Subject: presentation on changes to health insurance

In order to offer staff better health insurance, our company has recently changed the current insurance company.
A representative from the new insurance company will visit and give a presentation about the new policy next Friday on 30th June from 3pm to 5pm in the Conference Hall.
All of you are welcome to attend.
  

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MEMORANDUM To: All staff From: James Stone Date: 2 3 June Subject: presentation on changes to health insurance In order to offer staff better health insurance, our company has recently changed the current insurance company. A representative from the new insurance company will visit and give a presentation about the new policy next Friday on the 30th of June from 3pm to 5pm in the Conference Hall. All of you are welcome to attend.

  • MEMORANDUM To: All staff From: James Stone Date: 2 3 June Subject: presentation on changes to health insurance In order to offer staff better health insurance, our company has recently changed the current insurance company.
  • A representative from the new insurance company will visit and give a presentation about the new policy next Friday on the 30th of June from 3pm to 5pm in the Conference Hall.
  • All of you are welcome to attend.
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MEMORANDUM
To: All staff

From: James Stone

Date: 23 June

Subject: presentation on changes to health insurance

In order to offer staff better health insurance, our company has recently changed the current insurance company.
A representative from the new insurance company will visit and give a presentation about the new policy next Friday

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