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You are in charge of technical resources in your company. You have just received a letter from the Customer Services Manager at JLM Communications, who are installing a new telephone swithboard at your offices.
1. look at part of the letter below, on which you have already made some handwritten notes;
2. then, using all your handwritten notes, write a letter of JLM's Customer Services Manager;
3. write 120-140 words.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to thank you for your letter, dated April 1, 2003.
Firstly, unfortunately, we have an international conference on the 10th of May.
Therefore, this date is not convenient for us. Could you please start at the 11th of May?
Furthermore, we would like to know how long will the work take.
Concerning the numbers; the system you announced seems to be difficult. Is there am easier way to handle this problem with difference numbers?
As for our further requests, could we have a direct telephone number as well as the name of the person, dealing with us?
We are looking forward to paying the bills as soon as the work is successfully finished in case of any these problems.
We are looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Rihanna Thomas
You are in charge of technical resources in your company. You have just received a letter from the Customer Services Manager at JLM Communications, who are installing a new telephone swithboard at your offices.
1. look at part of the letter below, on which you have already made some handwritten notes;
2. then, using all your handwritten notes, write a letter of JLM's Customer Services Manager;
3. write 120-140 words.
,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to thank you for your letter, dated April 1, 2003.
Firstly, unfortunately, we have an international conference on the 10th of May.
Therefore, this date is not convenient for us. Could you please start at the 11th of May?
Furthermore, we would like to know how long will the work take.
Concerning the numbers; the system you announced seems to be difficult. Is there am easier way to handle this problem with difference numbers?
As for our further requests, could we have a direct telephone number as well as the name of the person, dealing with us?
We are looking forward to paying the bills as soon as the work is successfully finished in case of any these problems.
We are looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Rihanna Thomas
Top answer
Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to thank you for your letter, dated April 1, 2003. Firstly, unfortunately, we have an international conference on the 10th of May, Therefore, this so that date is not convenient for us. Could you please start at on the 11th of May instead ?
- Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to thank you for your letter, dated April 1, 2003.
- Firstly, unfortunately, we have an international conference on the 10th of May, Therefore, this so that date is not convenient for us.
- Could you please start at on the 11th of May instead ?
- Furthermore, we would like to know how long will the work will take.
- Concerning the numbers; the system you announced suggested seems a little complicated.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to thank you for your letter, dated April 1, 2003. Firstly, unfortunately, we have an international conference on the 10th of May,Therefore, this so that date is not convenient for us. Could you please start at on the 11th of May instead?
Furthermore, we would like to know how longwill the wor
I would like to thank you for your letter, dated April 1, 2003. Firstly, unfortunately, we have an international conference on the 10th of May,
Furthermore, we would like to know how long
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