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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
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To: Sandy Green
From: Lucy, Director of Human Source
Date: May 10, 2011
Subject: Work Transfer

I think, Mr. Brown, the Director of your Department has already talked to you about the change in your work. We have arranged to appoint you as secretary in the Sales Department at a salary of $ 20,000 a month as from next Monday, May 14, 2011.
In your new post, you will be responsible to Mr. White for routine work.
Your two years of loyal service in the IT Department have been appreciated by the leadership of the company.
Your transfer is completely due to the need of company because the former secretary will leave the office this Friday.

Please write to confirm that you will accept this appointment.
  

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To: Sandy Green From: Lucy, Director of Human Resources Date: May 10, 2011 Subject: Work Transfer I think, Mr. Brown, the Director of your Department , has already talked to you about the change in your work. We have arranged decided to appoint you as secretary in the Sales Department at a salary of $ 20,000 a month as of next Monday, May 14, 2011.

  • To: Sandy Green From: Lucy, Director of Human Resources Date: May 10, 2011 Subject: Work Transfer I think, Mr.
  • Brown, the Director of your Department , has already talked to you about the change in your work.
  • We have arranged decided to appoint you as secretary in the Sales Department at a salary of $ 20,000 a month as of next Monday, May 14, 2011.
  • In your new post, you will be reporting responsible to Mr.
  • White for routine work.
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To: Sandy Green
From: Lucy, Director of Human Resources
Date: May 10, 2011
Subject: Work Transfer

I think, Mr. Brown, the Director of your Department, has already talked to you about the change in your work. We have arranged decided to appoint you as secretary in the Sales Department at a salary of $ 20,000 a month as of next M

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