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Jenn123 Posted 10 years ago
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A woman's ultimate life and dream are instantly shattered when her loyal husband turns out to be a poligamist.
A woman's ultimate life and dream are instantly shattered when her loyal husband turns out to be a poligamist.
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pol y gamist
- pol y gamist
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I don't think 'ultimate' and 'instantly' add much here, I would say 'A woman's life and dreams are shattered...'
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Yeah, I think sounds much better to me:
A woman's life and dreams are shattered when her loyal husband turns out to be a polygamist.
A woman's life and dreams are shattered when her loyal husband turns out to be a polygamist.
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