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When considering people’s opinions about educational methods, there are always a range of points of view to be considered. Some people prefer studying in a group while others are in favor of homeschooling.
When these two alternatives are compared, I find studying in a group is better.

Let’s first look at the advantages of homeschooling. Nowadays, more and more parents are getting tired of the public schooling system the news reports which are related to school bullying.
I think the most important merit is that parents could spend more time with their children. It is of great importance in the early stage of children’s development. The loving and natural environment of home can prevent children from affected by negative influences and peer pressure from schools.
Besides, homeschooling is also beneficial for special children. Although there are special schools for this kind of children, I do believe that parents have more patience and care for their children than teaching staff.

Now, let’s focus on the advantages of group education.
Traditional group education is similar to the real society. People need to interact and communicate with others except their family members.
Compared with the children who study at home, Students who take group education are more independent from their family, and are more likely to develop their social skills completely.
Additionally, children can gain much more experience from traditional schooling. I think it is very significant in a child’s life. They learned how to handle with the problems they meet in school on their own; how to get along well with new classmates, and so forth. Personally speaking, I think the experience they gain from traditional group school will help them get used to the real social life easily.

In conclusion, from what has been discussed above, I favor the group schooling because its advantages are quantitatively greater.