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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
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Dear Joseph,
How have you been doing these days?
I have just received the brilliant photos we have taken in March.
I would like to express my sincere thanks for your warm hospitality and attendance during my stay in London. I really enjoyed my holiday with you and your parents.
In addition, it is so kind of you to send me these photos, and they will be my lifelong memories that I will always cherish.
I feel so sorry for not writing to you for this long time because there is a coming exam awaiting me. I have to do a lot of homework besides attending to dance room.
In your last letter, you said your parents and you were planning to visit China this December. As far as I am concerned, I will recommend you to visit Hong Kong because it is the most beautiful city in China, and it is my hometown. So, I can be a professional guide to show you around.
Please feel free to ask me anything question about your trip, and I am looking to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Lucy
Dear Joseph,
How have you been doing these days?
I have just received the brilliant photos we have taken in March.
I would like to express my sincere thanks for your warm hospitality and attendance during my stay in London. I really enjoyed my holiday with you and your parents.
In addition, it is so kind of you to send me these photos, and they will be my lifelong memories that I will always cherish.
I feel so sorry for not writing to you for this long time because there is a coming exam awaiting me. I have to do a lot of homework besides attending to dance room.
In your last letter, you said your parents and you were planning to visit China this December. As far as I am concerned, I will recommend you to visit Hong Kong because it is the most beautiful city in China, and it is my hometown. So, I can be a professional guide to show you around.
Please feel free to ask me anything question about your trip, and I am looking to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Lucy
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Dear Joseph, How have you been doing these days? I have just received the brilliant photos we have taken took in March. I would like to express my sincere thanks for your warm hospitality and attendance kindness during my stay in London.
- Dear Joseph, How have you been doing these days?
- I have just received the brilliant photos we have taken took in March.
- I would like to express my sincere thanks for your warm hospitality and attendance kindness during my stay in London.
- I really enjoyed my holiday with you and your parents.
- In addition, it is so kind of you to send me these photos, and they will be my lifelong memories that I will always cherish.
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Dear Joseph,
How have you been doing these days?
I have just received the brilliant photos wehave taken took in March.
I would like to express my sincere thanks for your warm hospitality andattendance kindness during my stay in London. I really enjoyed my holiday with you and your parents.
In addition, it is so kind of you
How have you been doing these days?
I have just received the brilliant photos we
I would like to express my sincere thanks for your warm hospitality and
In addition, it is so kind of you
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personal summary:
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