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Notice
An outdoor activity for all Form 1 students will be held on May 20.
Our school bus will depart at 7:20 am, so all students should arrive 20 minutes in advance at the school main gate.
Our destination will be the Central Dinosaur Museum.
When we arrive at the car park of the museum; before entering the museum, all the students will be provided with some handouts which have some questions and quizzes on them. You are allowed to bring your camera, notebooks, and pens because you will then write a report to be presented in a discussion about that visit later.
There are a few things you can do after the tour. There is a theatre on the ground floor where you can see continuous screenings of short documentaries about dinosaurs. Besides, on the first floor, you can make models of dinosaurs and draw pictures, or hunt for “dinosaur eggs”.
Furthermore, you may have access to CD ROMs with a wide variety of dinosaur games on the second floor. These games are a lot of fun, but they are also educational. You can learn about the lives of dinosaurs, how they found food, and so on.
Afterward, we will have a picnic outside the museum. So, please bring your lunch with you and take your umbrellas in case of rain.
If you are interested in this tour, sign up for it at the Student Council before May 10.
Student Council