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I love watching movies. So, today, I want to introduce a movie that is one of my favorites named Bajrangi Bhaijaan. What a movie! The movie is about a 5 years old girl who gets separated from her mother at an Indian railway station and how she is reunited with her country and family with the help of Bajrani Bhaijaan. Salman Khan who is my favourite actor did a really great job and his acting was convincing enough to make you see him as a simpleton with a naive heart. I laughed and couldn't take my eyes off the screen. This is definitely one movie I will have no problem seeing again and again. I recommend you to go and watch this movie multiple times, because we need to give a world message no matter what if we’re Hindu, Christian or Muslim. This movie will make you cry and give you the feeling that you wish there is no war and all of us live in peaceful place. I think we need more movies like this which show human values and good message to the people along with entertainment.
  

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AnonymousSo, today, I want to introduce a movie that is one of my favorites named Bajrangi Bhaijaan.
So, today, I want to introduce a movie that is one of my favourites. It is called Bajrangi Bhaijaan.
Anonymousa 5 years old girl
a 5 year old girl
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