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Many people assert that things that made by hand are always better than those made by machines. Although it would be easy to take this statement at face value, the issue is a complex one. From my point of view, I disagree with this statement for the following two reasons.
The first reason is about time and money. A factory which equipped with advanced machines only needs one day to produce thousand pairs of bamboo chopsticks. However, to finish the same amount of work as machines have done, a workshop may need 100 or more workers, and acquire more time. Besides, handmade products are usually more expensive than those made by machines because craftsmen value the quality of their work than the quantity. They often produce a small number of products in a certain period of time. So, the unique craft technology and time-to-manufacture of handmade products require higher price than those made by machines.
The second reason for rejecting this statement has to do with the consistency of the quality of products.
Machine-made products tend to have consistent quality because of the steady performance of machines. Nevertheless, the quality of handmade produces can sometimes be affected by craftsmen’s physical or emotional state.
That’s not to say that crafted products are completely without any advantages. However, for the reasons I presented above, I think machine-made products have more advantages than handmade ones.