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Nekosama Posted 10 years ago
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When reflecting on people’s opinions about studying abroad, there are always various points of view to be considered due to its complexity.
Personally speaking, I am in favor of studying abroad for two basic reasons.
The first reason for my position is about experience. Studying in other countries helps broaden your horizon as well as rich your experience both in life and study.
For example, my mother studied abroad when she was young, and she became more mature and independent during her stay in London because she had to make all the decisions on her own.
The other reason is to do with knowledge and instructing methods. When you are studying in western countries, you can experience the western instructing methods from that of China. From my point of view, I think one of the advantages of western instructing methods is the freedom of speech. In China, you can find it difficult to express your idea in class. Besides, students can make friends with their teachers easily in western countries. Most teachers in China are strict with students, so students are usually afraid of their teacher.
Of course, I don’t mean to say that studying aboard is completely without disadvantages. However, for the reasons I have presented above, I believe studying aboard is beneficial to students because its advantages outweigh disadvantages.
Please help correct my article if there are any mistakes. Thank you so much!
When reflecting on people’s opinions about studying abroad, there are always various points of view to be considered due to its complexity.
Personally speaking, I am in favor of studying abroad for two basic reasons.
The first reason for my position is about experience. Studying in other countries helps broaden your horizon as well as rich your experience both in life and study.
For example, my mother studied abroad when she was young, and she became more mature and independent during her stay in London because she had to make all the decisions on her own.
The other reason is to do with knowledge and instructing methods. When you are studying in western countries, you can experience the western instructing methods from that of China. From my point of view, I think one of the advantages of western instructing methods is the freedom of speech. In China, you can find it difficult to express your idea in class. Besides, students can make friends with their teachers easily in western countries. Most teachers in China are strict with students, so students are usually afraid of their teacher.
Of course, I don’t mean to say that studying aboard is completely without disadvantages. However, for the reasons I have presented above, I believe studying aboard is beneficial to students because its advantages outweigh disadvantages.
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The only mistake I found is in the second paragraph. You need to say "the other reason has to do with knowledge" not "is to do with knowledge".
- The only mistake I found is in the second paragraph.
- You need to say "the other reason has to do with knowledge" not "is to do with knowledge".
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The only mistake I found is in the second paragraph. You need to say "the other reason has to do with knowledge" not "is to do with knowledge".
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nekosamaWhen reflecting on people’s opinions about studying abroad, there are always various points of view to be considered due to its complexity.Personally speaking, I am in favor of studying abroad for two basic reasons.The first reason for my position is about experience. Studying in other countries helps broaden your horizon as well as rich your experience both in li
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