Hi everyone, could you help me correct this descriptive paragraph about my college campus? Thanks in advance.
My college campus has very amazing and varied buildings and facilities. Sitting on the top of a hill, the presidency building is such a nice painting situated at the heart of my university. It was built two years ago and was built of fine marble. Next to it, you can find the language center which consists of many modern and wide teaching rooms . Most students spend joyful time and enjoy sitting in its wide yard. Not too far from the language center, the faculty of law is an inveterate faculty that groom educated generations who will defend people's rights and support innocent people. Finally, if you search for a place where you can know more about the university, you can visit the faculty of admission and registration. We can see that my university campus is full of amazing and nice buildings.
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People here are reluctant to correct long passages, because it takes so much time.
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We are all unpaid volunteers here.
Don't use the adjective amazing .
It is over-used and abused.
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People here are reluctant to correct long passages, because it takes so much time. Sorry. We are all unpaid volunteers here. Don't use the adjective amazing. It is over-used and abused. Find another word.
My college campus has veryamazing and varied buildings and facilities. Sitting on the top of a hill, the pre