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A spring outing which is organized for senior students, will be held on 25th April.
First, we will spend three hours visiting the Starling City Botanical Garden where you can see various different plants. You have to finish a 200-word report and we are going to have a discussion later.
Second station is the Nature and Science Museum. Mobile phone is not allowed to use in the museum. The museum curator will introduce the history and cultural of this city for us.
We will have a picnic in the nearby garden, so please bring water and lunch with you and take your umbrella in case of rain.
The school bus will depart at 8:00 am, so we have to gather at school gate before 7:40 am.
Those who want to take part in the activity should sign up for it at the Student Council before 12th April.
Please help correct my notice if there are any mistakes. Thank you!
Notice
A spring outing which is organized for senior students, will be held on 25th April.
First, we will spend three hours visiting the Starling City Botanical Garden where you can see various different plants. You have to finish a 200-word report and we are going to have a discussion later.
Second station is the Nature and Science Museum. Mobile phone is not allowed to use in the museum. The museum curator will introduce the history and cultural of this city for us.
We will have a picnic in the nearby garden, so please bring water and lunch with you and take your umbrella in case of rain.
The school bus will depart at 8:00 am, so we have to gather at school gate before 7:40 am.
Those who want to take part in the activity should sign up for it at the Student Council before 12th April.
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A spring outing which is organized for senior student s will be held on 2 5 April. First, we will spend three hours visiting the Starling City Botanical Garden where you can see various different plants. You will then write have to finish a 200-word report and we are going to have to be presented in a discussion about that visit later.
- A spring outing which is organized for senior student s will be held on 2 5 April.
- First, we will spend three hours visiting the Starling City Botanical Garden where you can see various different plants.
- You will then write have to finish a 200-word report and we are going to have to be presented in a discussion about that visit later.
- Our s econd station is will be the Nature and Science Museum.
- Note that m obile phone s is are not allowed to use in the museum.
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A spring outing which is organized for senior students will be held on 25 April.
First, we will spend three hours visiting the Starling City Botanical Garden where you can see various different plants. You will then writehave to finish a 200-word report and we are going to have to be presented in a discussion about that visi
First, we will spend three hours visiting the Starling City Botanical Garden where you can see various different plants. You will then write
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